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Swåmp¤Faerÿie
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since 2000-03-29
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Illinois

0 posted 2000-04-11 11:38 PM


All things change so quickly.
People go from well...to sickly.
In one wink of a eye,
we live,then we die.
In moments,a clear sky is covered by clouds,
the moon's face hidden in shrouds.
You wish to die,then wish to live,
You want to take, but then you give.
Chance is strange & we all hate to change.
But sometimes,change is what we need.
Sometimes,we should follow nature's lead.
If by changing,you are yourself,
then changing is for your health!!
But if you are trying to change for another,
then your ¤SELF¤ you will smother!!
For we are all meant to be,
who we want to be,you see??¿


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

© Copyright 2000 Tivonya S. - All Rights Reserved
John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
1 posted 2000-04-12 04:28 AM


Yes, I do see Swampy. You are absolutely right. I love it

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
2 posted 2000-04-12 04:37 AM


*two thumbs up*  Understand perfectly... Wonderful job!!
Denise
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3 posted 2000-04-12 09:44 AM


Yep, I understand too. Very well expressed!

Denise

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-04-12 05:18 PM


Yes I understand ! Great poem  
twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
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Ontario,Canada
5 posted 2000-04-12 06:56 PM


I C 2 S.F.....Excellent poem....I like this.

Jack

rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana
6 posted 2000-04-12 08:48 PM


i caught several messages inside a  message there and i liked it, good piece.  it had the ring of innocence to it that i like.  
rich-pa

 "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

7 posted 2000-04-13 05:28 AM


Hi Swampola

I also see.....Do you see me
Is what you see...What I want to be
If I see Me and you see me
Does this make the total three?

Confusing aint it?

Jon


ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
8 posted 2000-04-13 06:10 AM


Change is yucky, change is fun.
I guess change can be either one!

I like this poem, I feel the same way about change!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
9 posted 2000-04-13 02:40 PM


Thank you   i still remain baffled by the swiftness of "change"....it's unreal sometimes =]

SwampFaeryie

P.S.
  Lovely wee verses Jon and Esp :P


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

JC
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since 2000-04-10
Posts 32
Pennsylvania
10 posted 2000-04-13 03:14 PM


Great poem! Change is usually pretty scary, but if we are doing it for ourselves, it makes us who we are....your message came across loud and clear!  
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
11 posted 2000-04-13 07:36 PM


Excellent, I got your message loud and clear, way to go  
Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands
12 posted 2000-04-14 04:56 PM


BUMP !
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