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JC
Junior Member

since 2000-04-10

Posts 32
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-04-11 12:35 PM

Intertwined

Life is rough, or so they say,
I learn to deal with it everyday.
Just when I think I have a grip,
I choke up, I fall, I trip!

It's getting tough with a full tray,
I need so bad to get away
It isn't fair, I wanna flip,
It's time to see I need a tip.

That's where friends come into play,
they know just when to let things lay.
You can be quiet, or let things rip,
true friends won't judge, they seal their lip.

At times like this, they'll mold like clay,
to help and take the pain away.
Their lingering prescence, is like a sip,
of lemonade after a dip!

Hold these friendships close I say,
because with time, they may fray,
It only takes a single chip,
to wreck a great relationship.

~Jenn 4/00~

John the cat
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 357
England

1 posted 2000-04-11 12:45 PM

Absolutely right. Great poem great message.

May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

2 posted 2000-04-11 01:53 PM

So true it's scary! Life has it's way of throwing curve balls in your face all the time, but you will learn to deal with the pits in the bowl of cherries. Man, I sound old! (No offense to anyone @netpoets!)

Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-04-11 05:44 PM

Great relationships don't come along every day. We should cherish the ones that we have. Good poem!

Denise

Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

4 posted 2000-04-11 06:39 PM

Great poem JC... true friendships should always be cherished.

To find love is to know true happiness... to lose love is to lose everything

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

5 posted 2000-04-12 05:23 AM

Startling piece of reality here.. Great work...

MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

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