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John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England

0 posted 2000-03-29 01:32 PM


Our World.

Our world is a special place,
Where there's a smile on every face,
Where life is lived at a gentle pace,
Our World.

In Our World we are what we wish to be,
We may see what we wish to see,
Everything depends on you and me,
In Our World.

In Our World there are no fights,
It only rains on the darkest nights,
Everybody gets their rights,
In Our World.

In Our World there is no hate,
In Our World it's never too late,
WE are masters of OUR fate,
In Our World.

In Our World each time we kiss,
My life turns into total bliss,
I know I'll always treasure this,
Our World.

There is one thing I know is true,
That there is nothing I can't do,
When I am living, loving you,
In Our World....


© Copyright 2000 John A Brown - All Rights Reserved
childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
1 posted 2000-03-29 03:37 PM


This is beautiful Cat.  Your world sounds like a very nice place to be!!

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-29 06:30 PM


It sure sounds like a special place! This is beautiful, John!

Denise

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
3 posted 2000-03-29 07:18 PM


Do you have room for one more in "Our World".....an idyllic place , sounds real good John......LET ME IN.
Another Heather
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 93
Canada
4 posted 2000-03-30 02:59 AM


What a beautiful poem John! This sounds like a great place you have here, enjoy it!

 "Be yourself... No matter what they say"
- Sting

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-03-30 04:11 AM


Sounds like you got the cream in your world catman.

This is a great poem of love.

Jon

Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
6 posted 2000-03-30 06:24 AM


John,

This is so beautful.  Our World sounds like the perfect place to be.  

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

Die In Vain
Junior Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 15
B.C., Canada
7 posted 2000-03-30 02:25 PM


This is very nice. You make it sound like the perfect place. The words are very comforting.

Thank you for sharing this.

John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
8 posted 2000-03-30 03:42 PM


Thank you all for your kind words.


It was a place I used to visit,
In what seems a distant past,
A land and life exquisite,
I suppose too good to last.

Since then I have been searching,
Like a starling for a grubb,
Until I came a-lurching,
Into the corner pub.

Perhaps we have such a place of refuge here?
I think so




 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Destiny'sChild
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 12

9 posted 2000-03-30 06:03 PM


this is wondrefull! i believe i have found such a place here and in the arms of the man i love . it is a special place
                       Destiny

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
10 posted 2000-03-30 06:40 PM


John,

Great poem and a great world. nicely written.  

~Gene

freckles
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160
Virginia USA
11 posted 2000-03-30 08:21 PM


John--This is SO beautiful!!  What a wonderful world you describe here; a woman would be lucky to share such a world with a man who realizes its significance.

 "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
12 posted 2000-03-31 05:33 PM


Destiny....I am pleased for you and your man, long may it last.

Gene & Freckles....Thank you kindly.

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
13 posted 2000-04-01 03:38 AM


This world of yours....I want in!!!!!! This is a great poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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