Cars Rush- "in four letter form"

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Cars Rush- "in four letter form"

Stephen Jones
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 53

0 posted 2000-03-25 10:22 AM

This is a little poem I wrote in response to a Challenge in "Poetry Challenge!", which was to write a poem using four letter words only. (much harder than it looks!) Anyway I thought it had a peculiar charm to it.... so here it is.

"Cars Rush"

Cars rush ever late
veer, zoom, turn, dart.
iced road. Fast rate.
need that fuel mart!
loud pipe ears pain.
stay left fast lane.
back tire goes flat.
bark, yell, cuss, drat!

Harder than it looks! try it sometime!

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13

Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

1 posted 2000-03-25 10:38 AM

Looks like fun Stephen...only I had to count to 4 , 33 times ,or was it 34.
Nice job.
Bike best
ride west
fuel nope
slow poke...........sorry.

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-25 11:51 AM

This is delightful, Stephen!!

Yours too, Twinsgd!!

Denise

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2000-03-25 05:10 PM

Like this poem very much !

This is indeed a lot harder than it seems !

childomine
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

4 posted 2000-03-26 10:53 AM

Enjoyed this very much. And - it is harder than you make it seem.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

Gene
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since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

5 posted 2000-03-26 05:40 PM

Stephen, I think you met the challenge very well.

~Gene

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

6 posted 2000-03-26 06:12 PM

Play this game
away with same
chop said name
hold your dame
love once came
flow warm fame
keep life tame

Well I tried, I think you mastered it much better, great job.

Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL

7 posted 2000-03-27 08:36 PM

Stephen,

You did GREAT with this challenge. This is really neat. Good job.

Sheila

...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

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