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why not
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since 2000-03-06
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0 posted 2000-03-19 06:05 PM



While whispers
float penetrating
minds and thoughts
I will still hear only the drums

Noise fades like
a note swinging
cries and laughs
And I will hear the drums

Vibrations vanish
inside capturing
rhymes and sighs
I will hear the drums

Drums humming
melodies hunting
thoughts
meditation
all devouring
drums


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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-19 07:11 PM


Very beautiful poem!

Denise

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-19 07:23 PM


Yes, very beautiful and, I can hear the drums.
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