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childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

0 posted 2000-03-19 01:43 PM


Where are you Bill
poet of brotherhood?
Did you think that
you were not understood?

I miss reading of adventures
that occurred in foreign places.
I miss reading of your "brothers"
and envisioning their faces.

Your words do them honor,
the Veterans of our land.
They paint the bond you had
as you struggled hand in hand.

Please come back to the Pub,
write more for us to see.
Share with us the footprints
left in the sands of history.



© Copyright 2000 Kim Soule - All Rights Reserved
KimW
Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
1 posted 2000-03-19 01:49 PM


Yes!!!!!!!! *Applauding*
I have only had the pleasure of reading one of Bill's poems since joining Passions.. But really enjoyed the writing and miss the person too.

Kim

William P Bussey
Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188

2 posted 2000-03-19 02:14 PM


Thank you Kim, I have not been on the pub for no other reason than I just figured people were tired of reading about my Corps, you see, only another Marine can understand what being a Marine means, and it is usless to try and make others feel the way we do. I appreciate your interest and will grant your wish, which you may regret......bill
KimW
Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
3 posted 2000-03-19 02:19 PM


No regret my friend  
Looking forward to reading what you post....

Kim

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-03-19 04:15 PM


A good poem! It's nice to know that our poets miss each other when they are gone...
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-03-19 04:26 PM


Wonderful poem, childomine! Very well written!

Bill- you are wrong. Your wonderful poems convey very much the 'feel' that you are trying to communicate! I think that is one of the challenges of a writer....to make someone feel and understand something that they haven't personally experienced! So write on Bill!! You do it well!!

Denise

William P Bussey
Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188

6 posted 2000-03-19 04:59 PM


Childomine, memories is in response to your very nice thought , thanks you, you are a good friend.
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