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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
I was at the mirror, Watching you, watching me. You were unaware that I could see the admiration in your eyes. The love barely hidden. In the deepness of your pools. Watching with anticipation, A twinkle in my eye. I waited silently while time was passing by. You approached, ran your fingers through my hair. I lost all sense of my surroundings, I really did not care. Nothing else mattered, I’d been craving your touch. Then the words were heard softly falling from your lips, “I was watching you watch; and I longed to feel your touch.” Kdw, Copyright Sept.1999, Modified 3/00 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Kim! Very lovely! Denise |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
This is so incredibly beautiful love....and yes, I know I am biased.  I cannot even begin to tell you how this poem makes me feel! Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Excellent Kim! I love this! Absolutely beautiful! |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Denise - Thank you! This is one of my older poems and whenever I read it, I realize how much my writing has grown. BUT, This poem is very special, personally. Childomine - Thank you. Your kindness and comments are always appreciated!!! Gary (Jonas) *Hugs!* |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem about a sweet moment in your life!  |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Kim, This may be an early work, but I think it's excellent. It brought back memories. ~Gene |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Poet DeVine and Gene - Thank you ! Kim |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
Kim, sounds like you were a great pair, very revealing words, love is all over this....bill |
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mokha New Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 1 |
I really loved this poem! I felt every word. |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Bill - Thank you Yes a wonderful pair. My soulmate for sure ! mokha - welcome to the Forum and Thank you for your reply! Kim |
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