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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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I Will Know I stand outside her door Hesitant Knowing she is lost feeling alone and isolated Yet I hold back Would my intrusion be welcome or merely add to her stress? I want so desperately to walk through that door take her into my arms an hold her Protect her from the stresses that life heaps upon her I want to stroke her hair and kiss away her tears while whispering soft words of love into her ear Will I be an intrusion? Or will she fall into me allowing me to take her burdens upon my shoulders? Tonight, I will hold her as she sleeps Keeping the demons away And she may never know that I was there with her But I will know And I will keep her safe © 3/8/00 Gary Pence Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
she will know. this was wonderful. i wish i had someone to feel that way for me when i needed it most. i love too much, and not enough. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Yeah, deep down she'll know...what a poem, Gary! Just beautiful, as the intention in it. Wonderful job!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is beautiful Gary. My heart is touched by your words. |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
This is very beautiful....I hope she realises how you feel. Brought me out in goosebumps!!  All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh Jonas...this is so tender and exquisite. I know just how it feels, on either side. I'd say she was one lucky girl to have you intrude. (grin) Speaks volumes of your feelings, and your heart. I believe it's gold?  I too, know how it is to be there, even if you're the only one who knows....can definately relate. |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you everyone. I wrote this for my girlfriend and soulmate. She always brings out the best in me! Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
She knows - I know she does! She also knows how very lucky she is.... I heart u love |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
I heart u too love...and I thank God every day for bringing us together  Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Very nicely done Jonas....much happiness to you both. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem Jonas, I liked it a lot. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so touchingly beautiful, Jonas! Well done!  Denise |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you everyone, for the kind words and the well wishes! Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very comforting thought |
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