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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-07 12:53 PM


I USE TO CRY
EVERYNIGHT
I'D LAY IN BED
HOLDIN MY PILLOW TIGHT.
I'D CRY SO HARD
I COULD BARELY BREATH.
YOU WERE BREAKING MY HEART
BUT I COULDN'T LEAVE.
LAST NIGHT YOU SAID YOU LOVE HER.
THAT WAS THE LAST STRAW.
WHEN YOU SAID THEM WORDS
I FELT MY HEART FALL.
I DIDN'T CRY THEN
BUT THIS MORNING A TEAR FELL.
JUST LIKE THAT
I ESCAPED FROM YOUR EVIL SPELL!
IT'S OVER NOW
NO YOU AND ME.
YOU "LOVE" HER
SO I LET YOU BE.
THAT'S NOT WHAT YOU WANT?
YOU COULDA FOOLED ME.
JUST LEAVE ME ALONE
AND LET ME BE!!!!

© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-03-07 01:51 AM


Another great poem, fe!  
There's a question that few ask but many need to:

What price freedom?


Little Spyro T. Dragon

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-07 07:29 PM


I too really liked this, fe.  My question is:  what cost love?

[This message has been edited by childomine (edited 03-07-2000).]

Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-03-07 08:15 PM


Fe-
This is good.  I admire your strength in letting it be.

Sheila

Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
4 posted 2000-03-07 08:16 PM


Angie, nice poem.
He's the one that be alone.

~Gene

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