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Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-03-06 05:00 AM



See that image in mirror's view?
That's an imperfect reflection of you!
It doesn't show what deep down you know
And the one inside that is true...

A mirror can show on the surface it sees
Many a critical point it gives with ease,
But deeper inside it cannot probe
To that powerful light within, like a strobe;

A mirror can show what a glance will see,
But it cannot display just what you can be.
Some have become obsessed with the view
That mirrors do show, the one that's not true...
Only another can really see
What you are, what you can be,
And that other can set you free.


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Welcome to the Corner Pub, Jon! Hope you like it here, I know I do... We're really not such a bad crowd, but see for yourself!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon

© Copyright 2000 Sam Reinsford (Little_Spyro) - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-03-06 05:22 AM


But When the Mirror cracks theres no going back! Oh No.

Thanks for your warm welcome.
Your verse shows me you understand exactly what I mean.

I enjoyed reading it. Thanks

Jon

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-06 06:49 AM


Wonderfully written and a poignant message!
Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
3 posted 2000-03-06 01:27 PM


Beautifully done, Sam.

John,
you'll find that Little_Spyro (aka Sam) understands and can analyze poetry amazingly well for someone of his age--or any age for that matter. I'm in awe of the abilities of this young man. He always personalizes the 'welcomes' by using something from the person's poems--very insightful and creative.

~Gene

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-03-06 07:24 PM


Another great poem, Sam! I, too, am in awe of your talent!
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