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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
When rainbows cry, do lucent teardrops glide down multi-layered carpet ramps? And do they blend in frothing bubbles as they slide on edges of each prism-painted hue? Does Nature catch the tears so she can fill her bucket with their golden solar power, then use its warm elixir - let it spill across the dusty feet of grateful flowers? I'd hate to think that rainbow tears dissolve unnoticed, into murky-puddled grey; as though an arching symphony evolved then every quaver slowly drained away. While I can't say for sure a rainbow cries, I've seen my tears reflected in their eyes. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
such a dynamic piece of writing...bravo!! your word flow is exquisite. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Lary; A masterpiece of poetic beauty! So beautiful that the rainbow only weeps tears of joy! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A beautiful and entirely different way to view rainbows. Exquisite poetry. Love Joyce |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Very smooth and eloquent poetry...it reads so well.... You have captured much imagery here, also. Very nice..... Twilah |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Really love this, sort of reminds of the saying every cloud has it's silver lining, maybe ours tears have their rainbows too. Good perspective, very creative.. I like.. I like..really mean it! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lary, this was so refreshing! A wonderful Sunday morning read! Thank you! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
What a lovely idea, that rainbows weep. The wording is very beautiful as is the flow. Betty Lou Hebert |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Hi Pegasus - you warm my heart! Ellie, that's so lovely, my dear - thank you! Joyce - I'm so glad you liked it - rainbows are very special to me....a sign that followed sorrow...in ways that seemed beyond mere coincidence... Thanks, Twilah - I really appreciate your comments! To my favorite Songbird - thank you so much! Sunshine, I'm so happy to share a thought with you... Thanks, Betty Lou! |
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