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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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0 posted 2001-03-01 08:00 AM


I'm stopping the world today
so I can write some words for you
they're not the best I'm sure
but every one is true

See, you make me smile hun
some times I even cry
to think that someone just like you
cares so much and then I sigh

Now I'm no genius, don't laugh at me
but I have a little power
my gift, my trick, my talent
is stopping LIFE for just one hour

One hour...and the world is gone
the stillness deep, thick, felt
and wrapped up so I think on you
and the cards we've both been dealt

Some play for money , or for fame
most play for some faux power
I play the game as best I can
to win, for You, one hour


~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~

Author Unknown..well at least to me..:)

© Copyright 2001 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2001-03-01 02:45 PM


She is one blessed lady, good for you!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
2 posted 2001-03-01 05:59 PM


Beautiful poem. An excelent read! She is definately a lucky lady if she has someone that can stop time, if only for an hour! wonderful job

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


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3 posted 2001-03-01 06:49 PM


So sweet

The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world.


Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
4 posted 2001-03-02 08:35 AM


Well Sol...you've done it again. Created another touching masterpiece! If I wasn't engaged I'd have to look you up! hehehe
Keep it up young Master, use the force!

~~Jamie


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
5 posted 2001-03-04 12:48 PM


Very pretty thoughts here, Sol. On the other hand, time can seem to fly by when you're with someone you love.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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6 posted 2001-03-04 01:55 PM


This was extremely Sweeeeeeeeet!!!!
awwwwwww so nice!
Good job on this one Son!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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