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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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only a little wasp wonder only a little star fly ignited saltweed coast crimson flicker in the stratosphere hearing like an earwig does floating light on the water wait high in the silence transluscent ebony quake easy crystaline tombstone element ocean spins filing a goodbye note to tomorrow with love and tears of rainbow gold hope is in the wings for a starfield far away heated hopes drift twining marmelade in your mind a coffecup full of dreams fly open into the swirling night crackling sparkles flame rises in two worlds we sit by a fire see the shining phosphorous waves far out where all waves meet and the horizon is calm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful images, Allan! Creative writing from a simplebeetlemeeting! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Allan, Great imagery, Keen eye here! Good to see you posting in the Pub again! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow I loved it!! The coffee cup full of dreams was the best line for me. Wow.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful imagery, but the coffeecup full of dreams I liked best. Made me smile  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Hi, Allan; It is so good to see your poems here again! This is so lovely, flows like a dream, as I remember your poetry always being wonderful. Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thank you everyone... I really needed this smile... |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
wow,this is really interesting,it reminds me of a pleasant melting pot of "lucy in the Sky with Diamonds",lewis carroll,donovan,cappuccino,and the beach. It's WONDERFUL!! love this,makes me feel cozy and content. lovely. swampie Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks Swampy! It was nice to see you get that link to Donovan - 'Sand and Foam' was in my mind at the time...  "...diamonds in the sea and all because of the phosphorous there in quantity... ...that crystal thought time in Mexico..." |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
hey i just checked back into my library to see if their were any replies to the poems i posted comments in,and WOW was i stunned to see someone else actually knows who donovan was/is. Farout man,i'm thrilled that dono still has some fans out there!! He's one of my favorite favorite artists,passed down from me mum to me, wow this is so cool!! HA!! and you even knew the song i was thinking of!! i am amazed!! :! "celia of the seals"? lol Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
how did I miss this the first time around?..this is beautiful Allan.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very creative! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a coffecup full of dreams fly open into the swirling night crackling sparkles flame rises in two worlds we sit by a fire ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Great imagery! Deb |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
BTW Donovan? Must be from the same era lol Swampie definitely is... as he said "far out" Haven't heard that one in a while! Deb |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
My imagination went on a roller coaster ride and just had a lot of fun and wants to thank you for such a creative poem! Smiles!Joy |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
This is such an amazing blend of imagery - flickers with its own unique atmosphere - inventive and delightful! Great read! Lary |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
marmelade in your mind... I like this best I think.. Great, Allan.. hehe, and very creative..“One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..” |
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