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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2000-12-28 12:48 PM


Kiss me hello
tongues intertwined
flowing together
dancing in time

Kiss me goodbye
lips gently touch
softly but surly
not giving much

Kiss me always
hello's only please
to always anticipate
desire's appeased


© Copyright 2000 Suzanne Arlene - All Rights Reserved
bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
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Clio, MI , United We Stand
1 posted 2000-12-28 12:52 PM


Suzanne...

I think this is perfectly delightful...

Best

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-12-28 05:42 PM


mmmmm...Suzanne..you got my attention..

love dem kisses!!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2000-12-28 06:06 PM


Very nice, Suzanne.     Hello kisses are better, for sure.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
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Santa Clara, CA USA
4 posted 2000-12-28 06:10 PM


Ooooh...suzanne...you got to the essence of kisses with this one!  Can't wait to see my bf again!  

~~Jamie     


"...I mean, when I first met you, you were all like, 'Oh Phooey, I burned the darn muffins.'
Now, you walk into a bar, and sailors come runnin' out!"

kaile
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singapore
5 posted 2000-12-28 07:30 PM


short and sweet, this gave me a smile
Suzanne Arlene
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6 posted 2000-12-29 09:26 AM


Thank you so much for all your kind replys. I wish you all Hello Kisses from those you love Suzanne
Munda
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7 posted 2000-12-29 10:42 AM


LOL Now every time some one says hello today, I'll be thinking of this poem.   Good poem Suzanne.  
Dopey Dope
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8 posted 2000-12-29 02:56 PM


Wonderful poem.....simply breathtaking.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Solstice Son
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9 posted 2000-12-29 03:59 PM


Suz darlin..I have to be a completely typical man on this one....** begins making a list of all the peeps he's gonna say " hello " to..suz's way *G*

Loved it!!

Sol

Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
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Ontario, Canada
10 posted 2000-12-29 06:44 PM


Well thank you so much for all your responses. For such a simple poem it sure means alot. And Sol hun  you are always suppose to kiss hello.It is what women want . Drives us wild lol
Denise
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11 posted 2000-12-29 10:18 PM


This is lovely, Suzanne!

Denise

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