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bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

0 posted 2000-12-21 10:15 AM


Every time I think of him,
My stomach turns in knots.
I try hard to control it,
But, it just won't stop.

My mind just doesn't know,
What it should be thinking.
Hurry, can't you help me,
I think I may be sinking.

My heart is beating wildly,
For me this is a first.
If you don't do something soon,
I think it will just burst.

I lay in bed and think of him,
I can't seem to sleep a wink.
I've tried all I can think of,
I've even counted sheep.

So I'm asking very nicely, doc,
Could you do something soon,
This feeling won't go away,
And I can hardly move,

What? You cannot help me?
Wait, what do you mean?
You can't make it go away?
It's the worst you've ever seen?

There is one way, you say,
To make this feeling stop?
Well, doc, what is it?
I'm just about to pop.

Hey, where are you going?
You can't just up and leave.
I've looked so hard for the answer,
Can't you help me, please?

"Okay, I'll try to help," says doc,
"But, it will have to be for life."
Then he got down on one knee,
And said, "Will you be my wife?"


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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-21 10:18 AM


this is cute..just what I needed today..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-12-21 10:30 AM


BestGirl~
Absolutely adorable.
The punch line packed it with a suprise !

Is it covered by insurance ???
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
3 posted 2000-12-21 10:57 AM


Pegasus....
Thank you, hope it made you smile =O)

Marge...
If only.....

Best


[This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 12-21-2000).]

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
4 posted 2000-12-21 08:45 PM


oh my goodness, that was a great picker upper, super ending...love it!
Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

5 posted 2000-12-21 09:28 PM


Ooooooooooooh LLAAAAAAAA LAAAAAAAaaaaaa!!!! ...Jeepers!! You go away for a couple three weeks and look what happens!!! *G*....very nice hun....very nice indeed....  

Sol

DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
6 posted 2000-12-21 10:01 PM


Bestgirl,

This was great. Fun read.

                               Dawn

Suzanne Arlene
Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2000-12-21 10:23 PM


That was way too cute bestgirl  enjoyed it from top to bottom
Suzanne

kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
8 posted 2000-12-22 01:09 AM


Sounds like the perfect cure for lovesickness, just what the doctor ordered!          Loved it all, Best.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
9 posted 2000-12-22 09:42 AM


Wordancer.....
Thank you...I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it.

Sol..=O)
I hated being gone so long, but with the accident and the holidays I have been soooo busy, but I am back and enjoying it. Thank you for the wonderful comments as always you are very kind to me.

Callie...
Thank you for the nice comment.

Suzanne...
was just in a silly mood that day =O)thanks.

KC...
Thank you, I always appreciate your kind words.

Best



[This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 12-22-2000).]

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