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Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-12-11 11:30 PM


You called again
To say you care
The words have faded
With the cold night air

You spoke of things
Best left in past
And how much I meant
A love that would last

Then mentioned your friend
The one you hold tight
Said you didn't love her
And think of me at night

A double-edged sword
I think you had
Swinging it through
My heart so sad

Next time you call
The phone will just ring
Your voice hurts too much
With memories it brings



[This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 12-11-2000).]

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pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-12 12:04 PM


I hate it when they do that..did you get my email?..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


nicolette
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42
St. Paul, Minnesota
2 posted 2000-12-12 09:54 AM


This is an incredible poem.  You are so talented.  I hope I have your strength the next time my phone rings.  Take care, Nicolette
blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
3 posted 2000-12-12 12:41 PM


BWA,
My ex got my best friend pregnant.  Then he found out that has AIDS.  I know that I cannot go through that pain again, so I tend to ignore his calls.  She died in a car accident at 4 months.  Tears.  I feel your pain.
Alicia

DawnG
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Senior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
4 posted 2000-12-12 12:41 PM


Broken,

All I can say is Wow! This is very good and I'm struggling with painful memories of a lost love right now as well. Wish I could write something half this good to send to him.

                                Dawn

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