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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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His... Wrapped cozily within His... Soft, feathered down caress. Comforted sweetly by His... Fluffy, plump, expressive smile. Warmed throughly within His... Flannel lined quilt of kindness. Snuggled delightfully upon His... Striped, satin, embracing tender soul. Embedded happily together Us... Full of contentment and utter bliss. |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Ria, This is beautiful. I knew you still had it in you.  Hope to hear more from you soon. Dawn |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is beautiful Ria. Glad to see you're writing again  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love the warmth and gentle tenderness! beautiful, Ria. Love, Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lost Dreamer, He sounds delightfully warm and cozy, I am happy for you, wonderful read. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I'm very happy for you and "his"... Very good read.  |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
mmmmm ... i duno why but this sounds like a kinda weally delicious feelin! Ria this is so yummy!!! hehehehe sweet and warm love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Gloria! Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this tastes like a creamy dessert after a fine meal..lovely the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Sounds pretty great to me. I love all the soft words in this. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ria, What a cozy, warm feeling one gets from reading this poem of belonging and intimacy. I also am glad to see you writing again, this poem is so sweet and tender. Dennis :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome back!!hope you'll stay here for a while  i liked the format of this poem..very unique and i liked the way you changed from his to us in the last verse...very nice |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ria, wonderful poem... very tender. So do you have "his" and "hers" feather dusters.. LOL just kidding. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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