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linger New Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 3Singapore |
hello people, I am new here and I wrote this about a year ago....I won't exactly call it a poem..but just some feelings...some thoughts... Destructed Devour my beauty in the darkness Baby come and taste my boldness Strange as it may be seen Love is just not far within Fatal attractions may all die Forget and conceal all lies Save me from all this turbulence Just grant me some silence There are endless streams of sorrow The night is no longer so shallow Feelings that I can't contain Emotions overwhelmed by pain Anguished in the pouring rain [This message has been edited by linger (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Linger; Welcome to Passions! This is a beautiful first post...."Anguished in the pouring rain"...what poetic beauty this line and so sad, yet so fully alive is that feeling in so few words. I'm looking forward to more of your poems. Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Linger, welcome to passions..good first post.  Save me from all this turbulance Just grant me some silence very well said. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Hi, and welcome. There were a lot of grate lines in this one hope to hear more from you.  |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Linger, This is a poem, and a good one at that. I'm still new to writing poetry as well and I am very insecure. You on the other hand have nothing to be insecure about. Welcome to the Passions family. Dawn |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi linger, this is a great first post I enjoyed it very much! Welcome to the family please check your email for a special greeting. Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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linger New Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 3Singapore |
hello everyone........ hi ellie.....I was really upset when I wrote that.....well... pegasus..hello...hehe..thanks... hello..raleighbttrfly..ya..will be posting more of them.. hi callie...yeah..I am also kinda insecure about posting..cause I really know nuts abt poetry...I just sit down n write..and I really don't know if it's call poetry.. hi dark angel...thanks for reading! |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
brr-r-r-r....very full of emotion, this is a really great poem!!  I can almost feel that rain coming down  Well, anyway, here's an umbrella, a blanket fresh out of the dryer, and a big hug!  ***HUGS*** lol, well, beautiful poem! Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Hey, Welcome to the Corner Pub. This poem touched me.  Some of my earlier posts explain why....Well, very good read and I hope to see a lot more from you. Always,Broken Winged Angel |
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linger New Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 3Singapore |
Hello....thanks again for reading.....been away for a couple of days...hmm... oh ya...dark angel..I received the card thingy..thanks a lot! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
linger, belated welcome to passions! this was a powerful intense read..you had me reeling from the eloquent lines you have written... looking forward to more  |
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