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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Late Falls’ sudden snow Crystals from the laden sky Borne on bitter wind Drifts to earth with feathered grace Its’ beauty belies its’ chill 11-20-2000 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful!! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
At the risk of overusing superlatives, this is perfect, Dennis! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, Wow, Dennis; Beauty and perfection in this diamind! "It's beauty belies it's chill" Exquisite poetry! Love, Sis Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
masterful write Dennis..must be nice to achieve perfection so easily.  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dennis, wunnerful last line.... "its' beauty belies its' chill" it tells me(a reader) so much of how the poet feels about snow... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I LOVED IT! Wah00!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Here in Florida we had our first frost this week. Your sudden snow sounds pretty - and I'm convinced of the chill ! A wonderful Tanka, as usual. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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