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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-11-20 04:06 AM


He said,
with you?
it's just a game
a test to
love you anyway
and I replied,
it's not the same?

Is it not so
with everyone?
I am not the only one...
are you not here
pleasing me?
you want me
to whisper your name...

and he looked down
at his notes
I told him
that was but scapegoat
avoidance
of the me in me...

He signed the chart
and set me free...

I grinned.
He signed.
Reluctantly...


© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-11-20 05:44 AM


cleaver approach to a sensitive subject that is so often misunderstood. well done.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-11-20 06:02 AM


Hey Sistaaaaa, Where ya been?
I enjoyed your poem hon  

really liked this...

and he looked down
at his notes
I told him
that was but scapegoat
avoidance
of the me in me...


Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2000-11-20 06:09 AM


What a neat little poem... I especially like

" He signed the chart
and set me free..."

Good job..


Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-11-20 07:20 AM


He let you out? Oh, maybe I'll be next then!! Good one Missy!  
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
5 posted 2000-11-20 08:21 AM


Turnin the tables on them.... never thought of that  ...so what you're sayin is we're all messed up right sweets...lol ((hugs)) you   take care!

You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~

Poertree
Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359
UK
6 posted 2000-11-20 12:24 PM


the unbelievability (is that a word?) of the Title lets it down Ms S ... ..... but ..  hey, this was a neat poem which got me thinking, and believe me any poem that gets me thinking has gotta be good!....lol

P

blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
7 posted 2000-11-20 12:42 PM


Wonderful post, someday I hope to be let out...LOL!
BDC,
Of course we're all messed up.  Isn't that the meaning of life?...LOL!
Alicia A. Renzelman

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

8 posted 2000-11-20 08:24 PM


Thank you corner pub people for tolerating my madness...and Philip? Thanks to you especially, for the "unbelievable"...grin...
Hugs to all, and now, if you'll excuse me? I do believe it's medication time...bwahahaha

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