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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-11-10 03:14 PM


Today,
I lost my muse,
My ego bruised,
I feel used,
I'm not amused,
Bad Day.


Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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DawnG
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1 posted 2000-11-10 03:17 PM


Maria,

I'm there more than I'm not. Hope your day gets brighter.  

                        Dawn

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2 posted 2000-11-10 03:27 PM


Thankyou Dawn my day wasn't as bad as this but it reminded me of worst times

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


bestgirl911
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3 posted 2000-11-10 03:33 PM


I think everyone can relate to this one....
I sure can!

Best

kcsgrandma
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4 posted 2000-11-10 05:02 PM


Sorry about the bad day, Maria.  I'm sure we can all recall such days, but will you forgive me if I say I AM amused by this?   Nice, grumpy little write.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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5 posted 2000-11-10 05:12 PM


...not to be improperly cheerful...BUT...I think..and it might just be the chocolate talking nodnod...you need to get "Bad Day" on t shirts coffe mugs and hats.....I know I could use all three some days ...* HUGE HUGS*


Sol

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6 posted 2000-11-10 07:34 PM


So..you think YOU had a bad day?  well, let me tell you..........loved this Maria..needed a smile myself today.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


a_little_girl
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7 posted 2000-11-10 10:14 PM


I feel comforted that SOMEONE had a bad day other than I.
--Little Girl


[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 11-10-2000).]

dgvarner
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8 posted 2000-11-11 01:02 AM


oh..this is..i love this..!  lol  i think we can all relate to this one..

very well written for one who has lost her muse...  

hugs, dg..


"i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..."

dgvarner
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9 posted 2000-11-11 01:05 AM


oops..i wanted to put this in my library..and i forgot to chk the box!  

dg  

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10 posted 2000-11-11 12:30 PM


Bestgirl - thankyou

KSC - Don't worry, found it amusing myself when I looked back on it

Solstice Son - Now there's a idea

Pegasus - thanks hope your day wasnt too bad

a little girl - Thank you too, I guess I do too

dg - I know false alarm I think, thanks



Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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11 posted 2000-11-11 12:36 PM


very cute writing...can certainly identify with what you feel cos i am going through the same thing myself....
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12 posted 2000-11-11 12:50 PM


Kaile - thanks, hope the day gets better for you

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Dennis L. White
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13 posted 2000-11-11 12:57 PM


Maria,
  Good news! I found your muse over here in the corner just taking a nap, all refreshed now and ready to inspire you. Write On Sister!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Moon Dust
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14 posted 2000-11-11 01:06 PM


Dennis - lol cheers dennis been looking for this

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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