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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I love the way your kisses whisper softly near my ear, and sip the very tips of my fingers before they flutter gently against my lips. But it is your eyes that hold me captive, your blue eyes, vast oceans of infinite depth, that impel me to come closer, closer, yet, it is your eyes that I am drawn to, Hypnotized, mesmerized, I am your prisoner, helpless, sliding with reckless abandon, cast onto waves of ecstasy, plunged, deeper and deeper into pools of blue ice-fire, breathless, drowning, lost, unable and unwilling, to save myself, from the powerful current that pulls me ever further, into the passionate sea of your magnificent blue eyes. [This message has been edited by Debbie (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
everyone with blue eyes..raise your hand!!....me! me! me!...lol great read Debbie. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Pwew.........sure seem magnetic those blue eyes......crystal pools of desire.....great read.. Jon |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Well, being brown-eyed myself, I've always had a thing about beautiful blue eyes! I guess that's why I married my blue-eyed guy! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Debbie~ This is a very sensual piece of poetry. How tenderly your heart is talking ... 'I love the way your kisses whisper softly near my ear, and sip the very tips of my fingers before they flutter gently against my lips.' Just melting ....  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Awww so sweet Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I prefer brown eyes myself, but this poem could make me reconsider. Very nice!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I am an avowed fan of green...(prolly cause I have green eyes lol) This is cool...liking it! Definitely an emotive work. K The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Marge, thank-you, that's the direction that I was trying to go with this! Maria and Marilyn, thank-you, I'm glad you like it! Severn, thank-you, and yes, green eyes are beautiful too! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Debbie, I am with Severn! Green eyes are the best. Great poem, very expressive. More, more, more! Alicia |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
....I never thought about what color eyes would do to how I feel about a person..but as I read the poem...and thought of the blue eyed ones I love...and what they have said about my greens...Hmmmm...I think I favor the blues...*L* I love the color on anything else...glad to have read this..makes my heart warm and snug...thanks so much... Sol |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
What a way to descibe the hues that hypnotize, and drift away the senses. Excellent job here on this poem, and I have to agree there is something about those blue's. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Alicia, thank-you for your kind response, glad you liked it! Sol, those loved ones...they didn't call you a green-eyed monster did they? LOL! That's what we called our green-eyed daughter when she was little! Lost Dreamer, when I met my husband, his eyes were so vivid blue that they were distracting. Yes, just the eye color made my senses go haywire, all I could see were those eyes! |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
There are so many shades of blue.I love blue eyes too.I like the way you expressed how they capture you Like a prisoner to a pair of eyes. Gateway to the soul i guess that is why it was so strong . Very well written .You took me right along with you. Suzanne |
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