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WEEBEE3
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0 posted 2000-10-29 07:00 AM


( A departure from the frog saga, WEEBEE3 is pleased to present an autumn tanka trio)

Gone the muggy days
Gone also the bushy trees
Trimmed down for the cold
Of the comming winter world
But for now....it's colorful


Autumns mist and fog
Surround the last of summer
Gardens vanishing
As Falls magic act appears
And she waves her colored wand


Colored trees aflame
What magnificent displays
Burst before my eyes
Filling my senses with joy
And true appreciation

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BSC
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1 posted 2000-10-29 08:31 AM


And what beautiful images you have brushed with your lovely words WEEBEE....  Bonnie
kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2000-10-29 01:43 PM


These are lovely.  We have 8 inches of snow today, so your colors sound even lovelier!  Nice departure from the frogs, as much fun as they are.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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3 posted 2000-10-29 02:36 PM


this is a great piece..lovely images.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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4 posted 2000-10-29 04:49 PM


Beautifully done, WEEBEE3! Lovely images!

Denise

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5 posted 2000-10-29 06:00 PM


WeeBee3~
A delightful trio of verse.
Lovely Tankas.
~*Marge*~


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