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0 posted 2000-10-24 09:32 AM



A smoky mist will creep slowly in,
Reflecting the gray shrouded moon,
Vampires will step from the darkness,
Dripping ooze from the slimy lagoon.
Bats will swoop through the frigid night,
And the wind will blow in harsh screams,
This is the eve that nightmares,
Will replace those sugar pie dreams.
Ghosts and goblins and mummies,
Will trudge with their eyes aglow,
Gnarled limbs of barren trees,
Will cast eerie shadows below.
Owls who usually hoot softly,
This night will loudly screech,
And every portal of safety,
Will be too far out of reach.
All Hallow's Eve is upon us,
Those ghouls will soon be here,
So make sure to have a light on,
And to keep the candy near......


© Copyright 2000 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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1 posted 2000-10-24 10:29 AM


I would hate to think what would happen if you didn't have candy available. Very Cute!

Alle'cram
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2 posted 2000-10-24 12:55 PM


WWHHHOOOOO!!   WWhhhoooo!!!  WWhhhhooooo!!!

You people who go to any lengths to get more candy....Doors Locked!!! Light off!!! I'm sacared!!

Rhymes
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3 posted 2000-10-24 01:23 PM


Hello,
I enjoyed your poem.
Cheers


Denise
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4 posted 2000-10-24 08:46 PM


Very good, Bonnie! Gotta get that candy ready!

Denise

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-10-25 07:27 PM


Bonnie you are a scaring me, this is sooo in keeping with the season and so creepy. Got my candy and waiting for them goblins to show up!  Love, Ellie

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



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6 posted 2000-10-27 02:10 PM


Very cute and wonderfully imaginative....

Best

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7 posted 2000-10-31 09:15 PM


Bonnie~
This is soooooooo cute !
I live out in the country, so don't get the
little darlings out here.
But this afternoon I took Trick or Treat
to an area children's home.
What fun we had !
Lots of chocolate smiles !
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 2000-10-31 09:22 PM


Adorable and yet so cute.  Really neat idea and presentation of it. very clever

P. J. Kotrch
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