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untold sorrow Junior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 12aiea, hawaii, united states |
you've given me the world my love with your sweet voice's sound now here we both stand blessed and so our sacred love was found i won't forget that fateful day or how roses are thorned for now within the roses bloom our love hath been adorned such pulchritude should be expelled and kindness that you'll see which catches me thinking of you in states of reverie for years my dear this lonely heart was bound and gagged within my soul was taken from me with intent of mortal sin babe you healed this broken heart with the love that you provide i promise to honor and cherish you and never leave your side |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
...uh...WOW! There's so much emotion here...I'll bet the subject of this poem would be greatly honored to see it! Great work, sorrow!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow is right... sorrow..this is an amazing pledge and love filled declaration...very nice!!! a perfect love poem! ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Such a beautiful poem! A wonderful love has been written about within the borders of this page. How very different the world appears when we choose to share our heart with another and they choose to share in return. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I just love love poems and I love this one |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Sorrow, this poem is remarkable. I can only hope to have the love you write about on this page so eloquently, so sincerely. Remarkable piece for your love to treasure.  --Jamie"I know I should have told you But I was so afraid you'd leave And now there's nothing left to say Well nothing that you'd believe I never meant to hurt you With the things I couldn't say I promise you tomorrow While denying you today..." by Stabbing Westward |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Sorrow, Truly a love to cherish. How beautiful the feeling here. I wish we all could experience such wonderful love. Sheila |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful! Sounds like you found the real thing!! Denise |
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