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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304


0 posted 2000-10-10 06:16 AM


Sometimes a glance across the room
Sometimes a chance that’s gone to soon

Sometimes a smile and sparkling eyes
Sometimes a tear and wondering why’s

Sometimes a warm and sweet caress
Sometimes a cry of hopelessness

Sometimes you do
Sometimes you don’t
Sometimes you will
Sometimes you won’t
Sometimes it’s hot
Sometimes it’s cold
Sometimes it’s hard
For you to hold

Sometimes you race sometimes you walk
Sometimes you chase sometimes you talk

Sometimes its low sometimes above
It’s hard to show sometimes its love

Sometimes it’s great sometimes it’s not
Sometimes you don’t know what you’ve got

Sometimes you can
Sometimes you can’t
Sometimes you wish
Sometimes you want
Sometimes you kiss
Sometimes you hold
And you forget
What you’ve been told

Sometimes it’s sold sometimes its bought
Sometimes you run sometimes you’re caught

Sometimes its hell sometimes its bliss
Sometimes a yell sometimes a kiss

Sometimes a laugh sometimes a squeeze
Sometimes you know you never please


Sometimes it’s blue
Sometimes it’s black
Sometimes it’s flew
Sometimes it’s back
Sometimes a song
Sometimes a dove
Sometimes it’s wrong
Sometimes it’s love


Jon Mewett


© Copyright 2000 Jon Mewett - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-10-10 06:38 AM


Jon; You're ability for diverse creativity is astounding! I click on your poems always wondering what you will come up with next, and I'm never disapointed and always amazed at your gift for finding something new to say and a new way to say it. Bravo!!! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2000-10-10 08:48 AM


JON..i cant help but love this...    sometimes its love  

i think you covered all the bases on this one..the good the bad the ugly..the love of it  

good one!  

hugs, dg


she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without
-clint black

MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
3 posted 2000-10-10 09:31 AM


I have to agree with dg, I think you have covered everything here...
~smiling
Maureen

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
4 posted 2000-10-10 05:18 PM


I can't imagine anything having been left out of this one! Great Job! Look forward to more. Bestgirl
kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
5 posted 2000-10-11 12:22 PM


It certainly is exciting to open one of your posts.    I find myself looking forward to them, wondering what you will have next.  I have to agree, you've covered the subject pretty well. Hope your sometimes are mostly good times.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
6 posted 2000-10-11 02:46 AM


Jon...You've done it again!!  Your artistic abilities never cease to astound me.  I read this out loud to a friend on the phone and he's been left speechless...and I love it, too.  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

a_little_girl
Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
7 posted 2000-10-11 05:05 PM


Another great romance poem from Jon. Very well done, if I might say so myself.
--Little Girl

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

8 posted 2000-10-11 05:13 PM


Thanx everybody............

Jon

Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
9 posted 2000-10-12 03:51 PM


Yeah I agree every post is different and just as good as the last Love this one esspecailly

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Honey Bunch
Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99
South Africa
10 posted 2000-10-12 04:00 PM


This "love" business sure is confusing!  Thank you for a great read - well done!

Helen

Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
11 posted 2000-10-12 05:45 PM


Jon, you da' man!  Very well done, and extremely well pieced together into verses!!!
CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

12 posted 2000-10-12 11:52 PM



Very sweet this one you have penned
Held me with a smile rite till the end...

                            
Coco




[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-12-2000).]

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
13 posted 2000-10-13 10:13 PM


This was music to my ears..
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