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Alicat
Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 1999-12-07 02:34 PM


Sweet I've been like sugar
Or so that I've been told
Until Nutrasweet and Equal
Displaced my taste so bold
Ignore this bowl of sugar
For most I am too sweet
Live your life from packets
From the café down the street


Alicat the Persnikitty


 As I sit here dimly thinking
Watching modem lights a-blinking
Churning out poetic hash.
Lord, in all Your piety,
Help me keep my sanity:
Please don't let the modem crash!  --Alicat



[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 12-07-1999).]

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Nicole
Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 1999-12-07 02:38 PM


Nutrasweet and Equal are fake...and leave a bitter aftertaste.

I'll take the the real stuff anyday!!  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-07 10:10 PM


Sugar, sugar...very sweet! Great one Ali!  

 Denise



Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 2000-03-05 03:50 AM


Yep they really have to read this one too ! he he he
childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-03-05 09:35 AM


Sweet.  Real sweet.     I've had enough of the imitations - give me the real thing!  Natural sugar is sweeter and exciting to the palate.
Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
5 posted 2000-03-05 12:11 PM


Alicat,

Only the real sugar will do, the imitations are never as satisfying.  Terrific post.

Sheila

[This message has been edited by Sasikat (edited 03-05-2000).]

Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
6 posted 2000-03-05 02:03 PM


I think NutraSweet and Equal are made by the same people...but sugar is made by God...so be proud of how sweet you are, Alicat!  

Keep on going, Munda, you've still got a few more to go!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon

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