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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-09-17 03:27 PM




~SUNFLOWER'S DRINK HAIKU~

5-7-5

Gentle raindrops fall
sunflowers stretch for a sip
refreshing cool drink

*By Melissa Honeybee*


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-09-17 08:13 PM


Refreshing! We've had so much rain here in Philly this summer that the poor flowers would be all drowned...hehehe....

Denise

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2 posted 2000-09-17 09:08 PM


Melissa, Aren't those sunflowers beautiful, as is this little beauty.  Bonnie
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3 posted 2000-09-17 11:16 PM


Melissa~
You continue to paint these little beauties
with picturesque phrases.
Lovely !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jon Mewett
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4 posted 2000-09-18 04:14 AM


Lovely Mel ......love the image of the sipping Sunflowers....

Jon

Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2000-09-18 06:59 AM


Melissa,
  Your haiku will have me watching those lovely sunflowers closer,LOL Good Haiku!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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6 posted 2000-09-19 05:40 PM


lovely

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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