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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN 
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SORRY GUYZ I KNOW THIS AINT THE BEST BUT I CAN'T SEEM TO WRITE!!!! TO MANY THOUGHTS GOING THROUGH MY HEAD I GUESS.  AT NIGHT WHEN I GO TO BED THE WORDS "I LOVE YOU" ARE LEFT UNSAID. I SLEEP WITH THE PHONE CLOSE WAITING FOR YOU TO CALL BUT THE PHONE NEVER RINGS NOT AT ALL. WHEN I WAKE UP IN THE MORNING I SEE IT THERE THE PHONE HASN'T MOVED I SIT AND STARE. I'M THINKING ABOUT YOU WHY DID'T YOU CALL DONT YOU CARE EVEN AT ALL. I KNOW IT WAS ME I LET YOU GO BUT IN MY HEART I WANTED YOU TO SAY NO. INSTEAD YOU SAID NOTHING. ITS NOT FAIR. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH BUT YOU DON'T CARE. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dont apologize for honest emotions...and expressing them is the best way i know to work thru them...write them for your self and your own heart...dont worry what others think. besides most of us all can relate  take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
I have been there! You said it quite well! I especially like the last stanza. |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
I agree.. no need for apologies. Sometimes being direct is this best way to fully understand your feelings. I`m sure all of us have written something just like this at some point in our lives. i know i have. "The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it." -Dylan Thomas |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
What do you mean, you can't write! If I could write like this I'd be getting replies to my poems by the dozens by now! I think this is a great job, even if some people don't...  Keep up the good work!Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Janet,Bev&Heather: thanks you guyz Spyro: *shakes head* lol come on now your stuff us great. better then this poem i promise.thanx a lot your great |
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