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kaile
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0 posted 2000-09-14 12:17 PM


Bud blooms in beauty~
People walk past, not glancing~
Too troubled to care


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ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-09-14 05:51 PM


So sad that they can't
stop and smell the roses here
lives not lived at all!

Wonderfully done, Kaile!  Ellie


Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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2 posted 2000-09-14 07:27 PM


Beautifully done, sadly true Kaile.  You too Ellie.  Bonnie

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Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-09-15 07:01 AM


Kaile,

God provides beauty
To remind us of His love
Why do we ignore?

Good reminder for us to appreciate the natural beauty around us.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


kaile
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4 posted 2000-09-22 04:43 AM


thank u all for replying...ur poetic responses are very much appreciated too

thnax

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-09-25 09:58 PM


Kaile~

Picked a perfect rose
Offered it to a new friend
His smile spoke volumes


*We should share more roses~
~*Marge*~


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Mon Cherie
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6 posted 2001-12-05 01:47 AM


Sometimes it's not a troubled mind that does not stop to appreciate the beauty, it might just be the fast-paced society. People move around so quickly, they miss most of the important things in life.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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