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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Caroline Sneedy, tall and reedy, always wore yellow and red and though not too smart, she had a big heart, (at least that’s what everyone said). One day in the city, particularly pretty, she met a strange man on the street, his name was Bill Klinker, and he was a stinker, (in attitude and in his feet!) Well soon they were talking, smiling and walking, like old friends from days gone by, and Caroline was captured, completely enraptured, by Bill who was sneaky and sly. Then he said Honey? You got any money? My wallet was stolen last night, and dear mama’s sick, I need it real quick (His smile was a dazzling white) Sweet Caroline Sneedy, though not very greedy was selfishly happy to please, in hopes that Bill Klinker, (the suave, hustling, stinker) would someday propose on his knees He promised to hurry and off did he scurry and when he returned they would wed, then life would be bliss for the naïve young miss, who looked lovely in yellow and red. But several weeks later, she searched for the traitor the shady fast-talking Bill Klinker, who'd fed her a tale as big as a whale, (and she’d swallowed it, hook line and sinker.) Caroline Sneedy, tall and reedy, always wore yellow and red, though she’d lost her kind heart, she sure did grow smart, (at least that’s what everyone said.) [This message has been edited by Debbie (edited 09-06-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
LOL oh my, i met a guy like that ('cept his name was Joe)! guess not only do we have to look out for Tom,Dick, and Harry....but now Bill and Joe too!! this was a riot! ~Dawn  "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
what a wonderful, delightful read..had to read it twice..oh my! beautiful rhythm, wonderful story..just can't say enough about it. standing ovation... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful indeed! I love it! Say, is this a Limerick? Denise |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Thanks all, this was fun to write! Don't know if it's a limmerick, but if felt kind of like one to me! Too long for a real limmerick, I suppose! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is a great fun read and I bet it was fun to write too.....just what we want around here..Bravo Jon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Debbie~ This was delightfully done - and I'd venture to say it did have quite the touch of a limerick form to it. Very enjoyable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Deb, This is WONDERFUL!! You have ole Bill's number and glad you got the word out, LOL! Made me smile bigtime and enjoyed much. Love, Marcy |
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