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jenifeather Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31Here |
forever i am lonely in a world where no one cares forever i am drowning in my own dispear forever i sit crying wishing someone, something would come forever i am listening to the silence of the world forever i watch the world die forever i am running away from all the hate forever i am desperate to get out, to go away.....forever |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sad,but lovely emotion filled poem..well expressed...nice work. take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I can understand your emotions here. Good job. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hope you'll be running ...forever....in love someday.  Well done. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Don't worry, you won't have to run forever...you can stop and rest at places like this, where there isn't so much of that bad stuff!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm sure we have all felt these emotions from time to time. It's, sadly, a part of life. Writing them down does help, I find! Denise |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
Welcome to The Corner Pub! Your great poem is filled with such drama and emotion. I also see courage inside there too! Keep posting! |
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