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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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Your Essence pervades my clandestine avow Transcending the universe, ages, and now Enveloping me with ethereal arms Beheld from afar that one self-same star My breath is entranced by mere visage of you, Enrapturing eyes of impaling blue Poetic mellifluence hearkens to me As unto Bach's rhythmical rhapsody, Symphonious dulcets of sweet violins. Your delicate scent alights with the winds. I feel your caress in the evening rains Your touch yet my reverie, still remains Your Essence enlightens the darkness of night Awakening senses enthralled to new height Your Essence embraces my innermost soul. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This is lovely, Nan! I especially like the stanza that referenced Bach... the whole poem has a melodic flow to it. Very, very nice, my friend! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful Nan..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
The "essence" of this poem is great all together. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Just one word comes to mind - Beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very nice, Miss Nan!  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like it, especially the last stanza. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Beautiful....Very touching. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, my dear friends... I posted this when we opened this forum - It's one of my older works - It's nice to see it's appreciated...  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely....of course it's appreciated, how could it not be? It's so melodic and beautiful! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
ahhh Nan...your words are just WONDERFUL!! I love this poem,it's so dreamy =] swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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