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Enchantment Before Dawn !
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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A timelessness prevails, just before dawn, when all the world goes perfectly still. A mystical quiet. This is when the fairies end their dance, and quiet their songs, and grant their wishes. As the palest of light turns the sky a translucent blue, and stillness grows even deeper, and all you can see is the effervescent shimmer of dew that kisses their tiny wings. Then they wait. It is their bated breath that stills this time of day. Waiting for those who believe, to utter a fervent wish, that the fairies only grant, that magical hour before dawn! Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply enchanting Ellie! I usually get up with the sun, but guess who will be setting her alarm a wee bit earlier now.... I love this beautiful little story. Bonnie |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi ellie, I've made my wish list! Lovely, mystical poem with a translucent blue sky. Just beautiful.  Love, Marcy"A mystical quiet. As the palest of light turns the sky a translucent blue, and stillness grows even deeper, the effervescent shimmer of dew bated breath that stills this time Waiting for those who believe, to utter a fervent wish, that the fairies only grant, that magical hour before dawn!" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Perfectly charming ! I'll be up to make that wish ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Charming. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie, You've transported me into an alter world which I can see so clearly through the special windows of expressiveness you have brought me to- very enchanting! David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, You've once again lifted the veil to reveal the mystical beauty that surrounds us, breath-taking! I Believe! Dennis :^) |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Believe it or not, three hours ago when I wrote "There Is Love", I wished that I would be able to write one poem as I was waking up. And guess what?  Well, I guess fairies are very gracious to sleepy dragons.  Beautiful poem, Ellie!! Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i really like the subject matter, and what better way to habdle such a subject than with an excellent poem. i dug it "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Mom, I love your fairy poems..they are so magical!.....beth |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Enchanting! Just lovely, Ellie! Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes, the word "enchanting" fits this poem to a T! Elizabeth |
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