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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
There are many great poets at Passions, Who write poems in various fashions, Some tell of their dreams, Some draw us moon beams, Kind words they never do ration. Their hearts are right on the screen, The most beautiful words I have seen, The pictures they pen, Go on without end, Like a meadow of daisies, pristine. I've been 'round the world in their poems, As I've read about fairies and gnomes, I've gone back to the past, With their memories that last, And seen gardens surrounding their homes. They've written of love and of loss, And of trouble they've had with their boss, They have written of space, And they've written with grace, And at times the old gauntlet is tossed. I have learned so much since the start, From the knowledge that their words impart, I've got a long ways to go, There's still much I don't know, For their help I say thanks, from the heart. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ I don't do limericks well As I'm sure this post will tell But I know that I smile when after a while I see you do them just swell ! *Girl ... these are NOT easy to do ... and you just did a WONDERFUL job on them. So delightfully YOU !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WOW! Bonnie, this is a masterpiece! When did you learn this? It's so beautifully written. I'm awstruck. Will you talents never cease to surprise? I hope not. Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Bonnie, This is simply beautiful. Your sweet heart shines through this one. Well done. marcy |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Bonnie, This is simply beautiful. Your sweet heart shines through this one. Well done. marcy |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Thank you Marge, for your encouragement and the wonderful. I do believe that you did a swell job yourself. Ellie, Just thought I'd try something a little different, but, I still have a way to go to get it right. Thanks for your encouragement. Marcy, Thanks so much, so glad you enjoyed. Thank you all, your kindness is very much appreciated. Bonnie |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Bonnie I think this is more than fantastic Actually the poem is way too majestic Your words always give me a delighted smile And make me think for a lot of while I assure you this smile on my face isn't plastic. regards, sudhir |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Bonnie, Once again your talents astound, Your words so generous, abound, The Pub is so blest, I have to confess, To have your rich talent around! NICE! Dennis :^) |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Its obvious from reading your verse Your computer is really a curse But we're all the same We'll be playing this game Till they drag us all off in a hearse  To poets Heaven and beyond Jon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Must say I was certainly impressed Each stanza was beautifully dressed By the words that you chose Whether rhyming or prose You limericked, with an A+, passed the test!!! ~~soft smiles, Bonnie Maureen |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
YOu certainly did pass the test And your limerick is absolute best But with others around The limericks will bound And we'll all reply for the rest great limerick Bonnie! stay cool  ~~Lavada~~  "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is absolutely beautiful, Bonnie!! Great job! Sorry I didn't reply in limerick form.....I did that once and got a headache....ouch! They are very hard for me to do. This is really wonderful! Denise |
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