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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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I have this foreboding today, That things might go astray, Unnerving, 'cause it isn't clear, Will I lose something that's dear? A black cloud hangs over my head, Was it triggered by something I said? I look about with an uncertain smile, Will this feeling last for a while? Were it a dream, I could awake, Dreams delusions from me shake, But to my mind this darkness hovers, Taunting me, the reason to uncover. Perhaps I can redirect my views, By reading this, the morning news, But this uneasiness continued to rage, 'Til I found my name on the Obituary page. [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
LOL, What a sense of Humor!! You had me going for awhile.... Very good read. Marcy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, Dennis this hilarious! ROTFL! I'm still laughing! You have the most marvelous sense of humor, I love it! great job! Ellie and now the comedy King of the Pub! |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Hehehehehehehe Dennis - This is terrific, I bow to you oh King of Comedy.... Bonnie |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Dennis, you had me totally sucked in. LOL... Good job. Still laughing here. Juls |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
My friend you had me hinging on every line, Good to read as everytime. Enjoyable piece.  Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dennis, Very, very cute so much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You did a great job of drawing in my attention and setting up the end. I liked this poem a lot |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Dennis! Denise |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hey not bad for a GHOST  Wooooha Jon |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
And to think, I almost missed this true comedic Gem--I must have been the one that was dead--but I've revived now! Thanks from your very proud brother, David |
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