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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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Life now is a war my armour is 'way too thin bullets pierce my dreams [This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, such power in your words here, very well done. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Allan...this is me right now...you wrote my life..when I can't even do it myself ~~soft hugs M only they pierce my heart and soul also |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Allan! This says so much with so few words! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wowwy...this hits home...all those things i'v been posting for my friend "abc" and youve said it all right here in just a few words..... great one, allan..i really like  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
WOW! This is really good allan. I can certainly relate to this. heart has no armour preventing love's deepest wounds casualty of war -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Well written, Allan. I hope the dreams survive. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Allan, A well written meditative piece, NICE! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
allan, Good Job! Your good at these. Load up with thicker armour and come on back! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very nice, allan...in fact when i first read this, i was going WOW!WOW! and was unable to react for a second... WRITE ON! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh wow Alan, this said it all. This is me exactly at this moment in life. Juls |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
wow from me too! - a bit overwhelmed at the numbers of you stopping by here! thank you all very much - you've helped me with your comments and given me a much needed lift in a particularly bad time. thank you for that, from the bottom of my heart... |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wowee allan. What a piece! A rare feast, in fact. A small but tasty morcel! Enough of my gibberish! You OK, BTW (in reference to the mentioned bad period)? ((hugs)) Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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