The heart within me cries...

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The heart within me cries...

crushed-pineapple
New Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 1

0 posted 2000-08-20 03:16 AM

The heart within me cries
A flood of ruddy tears
As love without me dies.

I know my mother tries,
And though I know she hears,
The heart within me cries.

I try to wear the guise
And smile with my peers
As love without me dies.

I feel my life's demise,
As hopes death-siren blears,
The heart within me cries.

The mask I wear belies
And covers all my fears
As love without me dies.
The sun, again, will rise.

But the night always nears.
The heart within me cries
As love without me dies.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2000-08-20 03:52 PM

crushed-pineapple-
good job on this. welcome to passions.
hope to see lots more from you.

   -vicky

"I have read your words, and within them
I have found your heart.
   -vlraynes

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

2 posted 2000-08-20 04:00 PM

welcome crushed!

this is a well written piece..sad, but well written

good wishes for you

smiles, dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-08-20 07:27 PM

Welcome to Passions, Crushed-Pineapple! You have expressed your sadness very well in this poem. Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-08-20 07:30 PM

Welcome to Passions

Very well done with this poem, I can't wait to read more!

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