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Unseen Love and Raging Storms - A Quatrain
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
I have not seen the tender beauty of thine eyes Nor seen thy body from gentle slumber rise But far away, I have felt the heaving of thy bosom Its raging storms, soaring into the skies. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Absolutely fantastic! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is beautiful..a fellow hopeless romantic ...  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
short and sweet piece i enjoyed  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Deepak~ This is stirring ! Nice to see you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very sweet and romantic (whats a quatrain?) dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is great! Very enjoyable read. (As dg said, what's a quatrain?) |
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