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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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Alone Alone in my world tonight, Neither wrong nor right, For my life I must fight, Finish college make something of myself, Doctors, illness, a van I cant drive, My needs and goals just dont jive. Oh to be free of this pain, Emotional, Physical its all the same, Someone to listen, someone to care, So busy with their own lives, There's just no one there. When will it be my turn to have someone care? When will you decide you can be there? Alone in my world today, Guess it'll always be this way.. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think aloneness is good sometimes, I like it. But being alone is another matter. Your poem is quite sad...it's good that you can voice your feelings this way. There are so many people who would love for YOU to reach out to them too..reaching is a two way street...Nice to read you!  |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, despite the fact that this poem is kinda sad, you must be very happy...because you write a lot better than 1/3 as good as me!  If I didn't know better (and I don't, believe me) I'd say you write better than I do.  Great job, Dawn!! Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
oh i do know how you feel....it can be the worst at time, but things will be better soon and if they aren't u can blame me... no well good luck and hope things look brighter soon enough... salooma |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Boy, do I know your pain. You have a remarkable talent expressing yours though...I always have trouble admitting mine! I hope you know, deep down, that you aren't really alone, 'specially if you have friends at the Corner Pub!!!! ~~Jamie  |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I admire your strength..you are in my prayers!.....beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You've really delt with this tough situation in beautiful words filled with great emotion. I hope you know we're all here for ya  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful poem. . . deVine is right though, sometimes, you have to reach out to be reached for. . . this poem is a start. . . ------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Thank you all for your replies. I was so happy when I got so many replies. I am going through some really tough times right now and knowing that I've got such good friends here at the Pub helps so much. Dawn |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
It is such a welcome sight At the end of the tunnel there is light But you know it is only right To reach that goal you've got to...Fight Your poem makes the battle commence. Best wishes Jon |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Callie, With your ability to convey emotions through your poetry, as you have here, you will be just fine. We parents don't take time with our young adults, thinking they don't want our interference, when in fact, sometimes all we need-is to know. Tell them (if it's parents); give yourself time if its more of a personal nature. Loved your poem, sorry for the rambling. Marcy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"When will it be my turn to have someone care?" callie..i know i've felt this way before...! its hard to be alone sometimes..but on the other hand, its good for us in small doses..and helps us appreciate the better times even more hang in there! hugs..dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Callie~ A reminder that I LOVE your name. Everyone needs that feeling of being needed - wanted ... YOU matter ! 'Oh to be free of this pain, Emotional, Physical its all the same, Someone to listen, someone to care,' You are right ... the physical and the emotional are both so real ... I CARE ! Great big ~*HUGS*~ ~*Marge*~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Marge, It is so appropriate that you brought this piece up again, cause once again I'm fighting health problems.  But, this time I'm happy to report, I am not feeling alone without anyone to care. I love all of you my friends at Corner Pub. Dawn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Callie~ You take care and I'm sending prayers your way right now. Love you, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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