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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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You can be brilliant Sometimes you are not so bright Crescent sliver smile |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WOW! This haiku is so lovely that it has me "over the moon"! Brilliant, My haiku brother,"The King of Haiku in the Pub"! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
glowing in night sky full or smiling...somethmes blue sunlight bids me go -vlraynes Love this Dennis...not a surprise.  Always love reading your poems. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlrayens [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm..i read this once....and couldnt respond--as much as i wanted to...i think i love it! well, ok..i know i love it...i just dont know how to respond to it yet LOL i'm not sure why, but this one really struck me.. ...but thats a good thing!dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This is way past good Dennis. How I love the moon up in the sky so grand lovers kiss beneath |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
You can be brilliant Sometimes you are not so bright Crescent sliver smile I can rise the sun I can be full of myself Disappear? Never... sorry... I am the child of the moon ~~smiles M |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Wow! I like how your description allows us to guess (for lack of better word) the subject. I like lots. marcy ps: learning from all you experts |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dennis, this haiku seems to be deeper than your usual stuff...anyway, i like the way it makes me pause and reflect on this for a while  |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
(my attempt at singing) "Can I just have one more moondance with you...Its a marvalous night for a moondance..." Hope I din't break any windows with my voice!!! Cute, Denny..I love it *winx*...beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Another great one Dennis |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Captured in moonglow Cheshire smiling full-of-self Waltz 'cross Milky Way ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Oh yes, you mooned me But brother, that's quite alright 'Twas a lovely sight! David |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
The last time I smiled Is when you told me the truth About all your lies monique |
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