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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-08-08 04:39 AM


She sprinkles her dust
and she waves her magic wand
her song like a bell

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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-08-08 04:56 AM


The land that never
can now proudly say it has
Haikued properly


Ilove it ellie
I am a haiku junkie and love pretty fairies and their dusty tales



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



jamesjiao
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
2 posted 2000-08-08 05:59 AM


Nice haiku, I am a haiku novice, but I do like this one.

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
3 posted 2000-08-08 06:20 AM


im also a haiku novice....but who could resist never neverland! tinkerbell is going to love this!
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-08-08 06:55 AM


Ellie,
  It's so nice to see you Tinkering in haikus! Fairie Nice!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
5 posted 2000-08-09 01:15 PM


I think it's wonderful
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
6 posted 2000-08-09 02:26 PM


i see sparkles and fairy dust.....  

very nice little ditty eL  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
7 posted 2000-08-09 04:16 PM


Well Ellie, I am just lovin' this....I should have read more of these before, so few words that create such wonderful images.  Keep writing these little gems, I'll eventually get it.... Bonnie
kaile
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singapore
8 posted 2000-09-04 05:32 AM


and the dust sprinkles, bringing a soft smile to this reader's face
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
9 posted 2000-09-04 08:22 AM


Thing here are dusty
A dust filled environment
Don't call E.P.A!

Your haikus are enchanting as ever, dear friend!     David

WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
10 posted 2000-09-04 12:20 PM


Ellie~
  
Casting magic spell
Tiny little Tinkerbell
I can fly again !


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
11 posted 2000-09-04 12:55 PM


Ellie, amazing images again..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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