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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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This is just a simple Senryu, but, I was thinking of my Grandma who passed away a few years ago and this was the result ~SENRYU~ 5-7-5 Angel in Heaven gone but never forgotten Grandma, I love you *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very pretty. Reminds me of song for some reason "Holes in the Floor of Heaven". Dawn |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa- This is really beautiful. I'm sure your grandma would love it.  -vicky "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Well Melissa Honeybee,...how do you do? Hoping well. This is a lovely one indeed if I don't say so myself. Yep!!! It's got heart. Be well you. *Peace. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Simple is an understatment here MEL, It is instead a simply wonderful tribute to the lasting memory of a dear loved one. David |
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MaryArlet Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 15Phoenix, Arizona, USA |
Melissa, simply beautiful. I'm sure your grandma is smiling, as am I. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very sweet melissa dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, This senryu has heart and soul. Well Done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Very beautiful Jon |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
this is a beautiful tribute to a loved one..well done. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
are not the simple things the ones we cherish most? Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Melissa, Such a simple, beautiful tribute. Bonnie |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Melissa, wow I missed you. Sorry to hear about your grand mother. This is a beautiful tribute. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is so lovely a tribute to your gran. Beautiful! Ellie |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this too, it's very nice  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Melissa,  nice thoughtful work here |
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