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SpitFire
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0 posted 2000-08-06 05:49 PM


Silkened Brushes

~~~~~
silkened brushes softly paint
hues of violet's sky
in velvet masks and curving caps
and eyes the taste of truth
of lengthy cloth and whisping wind
of steps into the deep
in circles path of once upon
in twisted rulings way
~~~
silkened brushes softly paint
hues of anger's scream
in depth of dark and hidden cries
and ears that shyly bleed
of tangled limbs and speaking stars
of leaps into the new
in tragic trails of sleep ago
in silkened brushed on hue.
~~~~~



© Copyright 2000 SpitFire - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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ireland
1 posted 2000-08-06 06:01 PM


WOW Spitfire, stunning images. This is an amazing piece., wonderful images. Take a bow, this is a masterpiece.  

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meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank,
searching for you," Joy divison

Denise
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2 posted 2000-08-06 07:38 PM


Beautifully done, SpitFire!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-08-06 08:05 PM


SpitFire~
Wow !
A piece worthy of the lovely title
that drew me in.
~*Marge*~


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DawnG
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4 posted 2000-08-06 10:13 PM


I totally agree. This is great!

                                   Dawn

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5 posted 2000-08-07 12:51 PM


A big "Wow!"---this was just captivating---loved the comparison/contrast--and yes I keep reading, and yes, it just keeps getting better and better....hugs!
allan
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6 posted 2000-08-07 02:35 PM


Mind streaming nicely here Spitfire!  
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