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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-05 06:54 AM


White wings soar on high
Far above the windswept waves
Follow fishing boats

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2000-08-05 08:26 AM


love this painting youve put in my head, dennis!  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2000-08-05 12:56 PM



Dennis-
  Beautiful!  Makes me want to be there.  

  -vicky

"I have read your words, and within them I
have found your heart.
  -vlraynes

deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-08-05 04:19 PM


But the Master's plan
Left me standing on the shore
His works to adore!

Yes a lovely and inviting coastal scene-which at once seems relaxing and invigorating. Very good, Brother!  David


"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-08-05 09:21 PM


Wonderfully serene; now I'm on a roll...

Swooping for the fish
They throw back out to the sea
some caught in midair

This so much fun. I can't believe what I've been missing!

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-08-06 08:50 PM


~I live there. You have painted a picture of my home. Yep!!! Just Lovely. Thank you kind and talented haiku writer. Be well. *Peace.
DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
6 posted 2000-08-06 09:52 PM


Just beautiful..

                        Dawn

Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
7 posted 2000-08-07 06:54 PM



WOW, now Dennis this is simply perfect, my mind could picture it, this is a classic.  I love it!  One of your best, my friend!  You really are the king of haikus!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly


allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
8 posted 2000-08-08 03:13 PM


Fabulously descriptive Dennis. Very well done!  

[This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-08-2000).]
Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
9 posted 2000-08-08 06:42 PM


A seaside delight!



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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