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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2000-08-04 11:03 PM



           old friends far apart
     miles denying outstretched hands
           hearts denying miles

                -vlraynes

   love you and miss you my faraway friend.
   you know who you are.    


   "...until you have read the verse on his
    heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                -vlraynes
                


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-04-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
Stephanos
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1 posted 2000-08-05 02:09 AM


You put so much thought and beauty here in such a few words.  exquisitely done!
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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2 posted 2000-08-05 06:40 AM


VlRaynes,
  Another wonderful work, WELL DONE!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2000-08-05 08:08 AM



distance is our bridge
an invisible walkway
our hearts choose to cross

=)  thanks tricks..

lv,dg
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"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran



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vlraynes
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4 posted 2000-08-05 12:40 PM



Stephanos-
  Thanks so much for the kind words.
  Glad you enjoyed this.    

Dennnis-
  Thanks you, Dennis.  So glad you
  like this.  I really appreciate
  your response.  

dg-
  Cool!  A poetic response.  Love it.
  Thanks for reading, and thanks for
  knowing.      

        "distance is our bridge
          an invisible walkway
       our hearts choose to cross"

  Oh, so true this is.    
  Thanks, back.  
             love ya,  tricks

THANKS AGAIN EVERYONE!!    

  -Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
  -vlraynes


    


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-05-2000).]

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-08-05 06:13 PM


Vicky~

Across time-worn miles
I bridge the gap between us
Reaching 'cross with smiles


~*Marge*~

*Thanks for a moment of inspiration !



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-08-05 10:08 PM



Marge-
  Thank you so much for the poetic response.

           "Across time-worn miles
         I bridge the gap between us
         Reaching 'cross with smiles"

  I LOVE THIS!!
  Glad this was an inspiration.  

  -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on
his heart, you have not truely met
the poet.
                 -vlraynes

DawnG
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7 posted 2000-08-08 09:50 PM


Vl,

Thanks for the reminder that love crosses the miles. I fear a friend moving away, hopefully I can remember while the distance may be far the love wont be..

                                    Dawn

MaryArlet
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8 posted 2000-08-08 10:15 PM


I love it Vicky. Said with the heart of true friendship!!


Jamie
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9 posted 2000-08-08 11:47 PM


Outstanding!



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Majestic
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houston, tx.
10 posted 2000-08-09 11:34 PM


heart-wrenching beautiful!

"To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



BSC
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11 posted 2000-08-10 08:00 AM


What's in our hearts can never be lost through distance....Your few words have said so much.  This is beautiful.  Bonnie
Lakewalker
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12 posted 2000-08-10 12:51 PM


Very well done, what beautiful words
chibi_dragon
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13 posted 2000-08-10 12:56 PM


Whoa...this is so true. Hearts do seem to defy the object called distance.
--Chibi

kaile
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14 posted 2000-08-11 05:48 AM


very nice and such comforting words for the rest of us all
ellie LeJeune
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15 posted 2000-08-11 05:55 AM


I love this because there are so many dear friends that I've made here at Passions, that are so far away.  Beautiful!  love, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
16 posted 2000-08-12 06:15 PM



OOPS!!  Seems i've let myself get a little
behind on the responses here, so i'll just
say a BIG 'THANK YOU' to all of you for all
the kind words.  Your responses mean more
than you know.  So glad you enjoyed this.  

LOVE YOU ALL,
        -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                     -vlraynes

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