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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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heres a haiku i wrote long before i knew "haiku"..!! ------------------------------ the blue sun recoiled off a shimmering red sea the world turned purple -------------------- (no..i'm not going to explain the "blue sun" LOL enjoy it however you need to!  dg)"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is enchanting, I love it! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- you need not explain it. it's your 'blue sun', and I love it.  -vicky (tricks) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
eL: enchanting..ooh, i like that word thanks tricks: never did have to explain them to you..you just put your own meaning to them and enjoyed!!  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Wonderful images! I can see the blue sun quite well indeed. As said above no need to explain. Lady Nogs |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks lady nogs!! youre a new friend, havent heard from you before--thanks for stopping in to read me dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DGVarner~ Blue Sun makes perfect Ending to a day of joy Closing purple shades ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
dg u juz painted another sacred picture for mi to enjoy and retreat to! *S* this is so sweet! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
marge! great one! glad i could inspire you michelle: so glad you liked my "painting"! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgVarner, What a beautiful display of colors and talent, This is SO good! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOW DENNIS..THANKS FOR YOUR ENCOURAGEMENT didnt expect such a liking to this one..just found it in an old book of mine..thought it interesting glad you liked! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Wow, that's an awesome haiku - that opens a whole new idea of haiku for me - a gently touch of the surreal... Amazing. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Dg,...this blue sun haiku is candy,...yep!, candy for my brain! I've taken it and gobbled it up. Loved it. Take care. *Peace. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
aw allan..youre too kind..just too kind!  thanks for reading--i'm glad you liked it!spitfire..you think?? thanks! hope it was the right flavor! i'm on my way to read your first haiku right now dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i believe allan has said it all...a gentle touch of the surreal....hmmm...will try to incorporate such novelty into my own poetry thanx for sharing |
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