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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2000-07-29 01:01 AM



i've spent too much time
waiting around
for those of you
who say you'll be there--
i'm wasting time.

for every second
i spend waiting
for you to come
because you said you would
i move myself closer
to death,
without yet
having lived--
i want to live.

i've spent too much time
waiting for life to happen...

say good-bye to me,
i must be on my way--
or put your hand in mine
and come with me--
but dont wait!
or i'll be gone.

-dgvarner



"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran

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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-07-29 01:30 AM



   Ouch!  This hits too close to home.
   I like it a lot, but it makes me feel
   very sad (not to mention guilty)   ;
  
   Love ya,
      Miss ya,
          Tricks  

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2000-07-29 07:15 AM


(dont worry tricks..this one was just written yesterday!!  ...)

thanks for reading  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran

DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
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3 posted 2000-07-29 12:16 PM


DG,

Oh, Yes, this one does hit very close to home. I think I've definately done more waiting in my life than enjoying of life. Great piece.

                      Dawn

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
4 posted 2000-07-30 08:25 AM


This is so true, dgvarner! I hate waiting...esp in vain....... = (


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-08-09 01:07 AM


callie: time for us to live     thanks for you reply!

midnite: i hate to wait in vain too!!  appreciate your reply  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
6 posted 2000-08-09 10:46 PM


Saddle my horse! Tonight I ride, to leave for new horizons and leave this waiting hell behind!



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2000-08-09 11:01 PM


lol..jamie youre so funny..  

can i ride that horse with you??     i could stand a new horizon!  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


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