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Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 88
Texas,USA

0 posted 2000-07-29 12:36 PM


Hearstrings,began to lose control
As memories,burn into our soul
Our hearts have often touched you know
As our life together continues to grow

Lonely miles blend into lonely years
Love and laughter,crying lots of tears
The times and miles pull us away,
We miss each other,too much to say!

The feelings we felt and listened to
Will preserve out love forever true
And heartbeats,we have often shared
Clearly proves, we truly cared!

Shared time together,shall return
With many bridges to cross and burn
Life continues together,as we once knew
As memories of love,flourish anew!


By:Brenda Hall




[This message has been edited by Brenda Hall (edited 07-29-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2000-07-29 01:15 AM


i feel this, brenda...this says something to me right now....

and i hope its true, that "shared time together shall return..."

nice poem  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-07-29 09:28 AM


Brenda, Wonderful poem, I enjoyed, welcome to passions I hope you enjoy your stay  
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-07-29 10:05 AM


Brenda,
This is a truly beautiful poem of love and companionship- you have my vote.  David

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-07-29 04:50 PM


Very nicely written with good strong emotion.  
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-07-29 06:06 PM


good poem you showed alot of feelings in it. you got a vote from me!

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
6 posted 2000-07-30 08:53 AM


Yup this is so special, Brenda! Here's my vote *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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