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Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
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0 posted 2000-07-28 08:12 AM


You live in my dreams
I can’t wait for sleep;
Go to our special place darling,
it is tonight that we will meet.

We will dance underneath
the brilliant moonlight;
our shadows will merge,
by the fireflies light.

You will hold me close
and our hearts will beat as one;
We will speak about forever,
our forever has just begun.

We live in eternal happiness
our pain fades away;
how magical this dream has been,
now the night must turn into day.

My eyes are heavy this morning
blinded by the sun’s light;
My heart will not be sad today,
For I will see you again tonight!



You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

© Copyright 2000 BAB - All Rights Reserved
Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville
1 posted 2000-07-28 12:39 PM


Oh yes, very well done, and well put....

DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
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2 posted 2000-07-28 02:45 PM


I love your work Lady Lost. It's good to see you dreaming of love again.  

                                 Dawn

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-07-28 03:28 PM


i liked this one alot. i hope that one day your dreams come true. and you meet this mystery man.

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-07-28 03:31 PM


What a lovely rendezvous...I would be looking forward to it too...nice work, beth, I enjoyed..
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-07-28 05:24 PM


Dear Beth; Wow! I love the romantic bliss and the flow, so beautiful...great job.
You are so talented. Love, Mom

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2000-07-29 12:37 PM


LadyLost~
This is wonderful !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
7 posted 2000-07-29 07:06 PM


Lady Lost,
I love it! Well written by a lady who is not lost, but rather has found a talent along the way.
Liz

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
8 posted 2000-07-30 12:18 PM




Lady Lost-  
  This is beautiful, and oh so romantic.
  I love it.  

  -vlraynes (vicky)


"I have read your words, and within them
I have found your heart.   -vlraynes

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
9 posted 2000-07-30 08:40 PM


Dear Beth,
  A dreamworld can be a lovely substitute for a while- until that right man come into your life--until then dream on in your sweet blissfulness.  Good Job!   David

"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

10 posted 2000-07-30 10:34 PM


Very beautiful!  

Denise

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
11 posted 2000-07-31 06:04 AM


How delightful it is to be able to dream...but so sad that we haf to wake up! Lady Lost, this is so very beautiful! Thanks for sharin this...its really heart-rending *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
12 posted 2000-07-31 01:15 PM


Beth,
  Sweet dreams indeed! You write so well!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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